The former Doctor Who showrunner has made the first draft of the day of the Doctor script, available for the charity project A Second Target for Tommy. There are a couple of changes.
Moffat says:
“While novelising Day of the Doctor, I went back through all the many drafts of the script, and I found this version of the barn scene.
The Moment is clearly not Rose Tyler in this draft, and the barn itself has a different, erm, origin. If barns can be said to have origins.
But the other big difference is the one that people might get a kick out of. Hope you enjoy, but please do keep in mind this is the roughest of early drafts…”
THE NINTH DOCTOR
Don’t sit on that.
RAGGEDY GIRL
Why not?
He strides over to her, grabs her arm.
THE NINTH DOCTOR
Because it’s not a chair, love – it’s the most dangerous weapon in the universe.
THE NINTH DOCTOR
Listen. A very bad thing is gonna happen here and I’m not sure how it’s gonna work. But I don’t think you want to be here when it does, okay?
RAGGEDY GIRL
…you’ve got a funny face.
THE NINTH DOCTOR
You should see the other fellas.
RAGGEDY GIRL
I like it though.
THE NINTH DOCTOR
Thanks, it’s new. Not sure about the ears yet, they just sort of kept going. Now, you need to get away from here. You need to pick a direction and just run –
RAGGEDY GIRL
You sound clever
THE NINTH DOCTOR
Not clever enough to figure out how this thing works, so could you give us some hush?
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